For this assignment, students have been asked to post their
third of three elevator pitch videos. Continuing the trend from that has been
developing during the second half of this semester, students have also been
asked to reflect on the feedback that they have received from their second
elevator pitch. To make things more transparent, I will post the feedback that
I received below. Let’s jump into it!
“Hey Michael!
I really enjoyed watching your video about the further consideration of your coffee business! I especially like how you incorporated comments from your last pitch to make this one even better. It really is important to incorporate either statistics or background information about the area in which you were going to open these coffee shops and you did it successfully, thanks for sharing!”
I really enjoyed watching your video about the further consideration of your coffee business! I especially like how you incorporated comments from your last pitch to make this one even better. It really is important to incorporate either statistics or background information about the area in which you were going to open these coffee shops and you did it successfully, thanks for sharing!”
“Hey Michael,
Your video was very enjoyable as you delved deeper into your coffee business idea. Using elements of your last speech and combing them with the feedback your peers had on your previous one was a great idea, as it allowed growth not only for you as a person, but for your business idea. Using the data you did research on to make sure that you are addressing a need in a market and have a diverse amount of products that is not overly diverse, but is fulfilling the exact needs of the customer was something that I enjoyed learning about. You presented this information in a great way, and this pitch would have me investing in your business in no time. Thanks for sharing!”
Your video was very enjoyable as you delved deeper into your coffee business idea. Using elements of your last speech and combing them with the feedback your peers had on your previous one was a great idea, as it allowed growth not only for you as a person, but for your business idea. Using the data you did research on to make sure that you are addressing a need in a market and have a diverse amount of products that is not overly diverse, but is fulfilling the exact needs of the customer was something that I enjoyed learning about. You presented this information in a great way, and this pitch would have me investing in your business in no time. Thanks for sharing!”
“Michael, your pitch was very well thought out and I could
tell that you put a lot of planning into what you were saying. The statistics
and other information was very relevant and insightful. Sometimes it can be
hard to have just the right amount of data to present in these quick pitches,
but I think you found a great balance!”
I found
this feedback to be overwhelmingly positive. I think that if I were to get this
type of feedback in the real world of business, I would keep on doing what I
was doing. With that being said, I have decided to not change my pitch because
all three of the people who gave me feedback did not point out any weak parts
of my pitch!
Link to video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Esb66AAWF2k
Hey Michael!
ReplyDeleteI thought that your elevator pitch was spot on! Looking at the development of your pitch from the first one, you definitely caught me with this one. The pitch was straight to the point and had a fun little introduction, making your pitch very simple and easy to configure. Really like how you changed your pitch from the feedback from the last one, I could really see the difference. Thanks for sharing!
Again, excellent pitch! You very clearly communicated the details of your business and had an intro that thoroughly grabbed my attention. I think this pitch is excellent and will certainly serve you and your business idea well!
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