This week’s assignment will follow the trend from
the past few weeks of focusing on feedback. More specifically, students are
being asked to follow up the first Idea Napkin assignment by incorporating the
feedback that we received from our peers into a new Idea Napkin. For
clarification purposes, I will be posting the feedback below. Let’s get
started!
“Michael,
I like how defined your business model is, but the restaurant industry is very volatile. My family has owned restaurants my entire life, and you really have to have a product that differentiates your business from the competition in order to succeed. Without knowing if there is any competition or other businesses like yours in the area that you plan on starting the coffee shop, it is hard to project whether or not your claims about a dedicated base of customers will actually exist. Thanks for sharing!”
I like how defined your business model is, but the restaurant industry is very volatile. My family has owned restaurants my entire life, and you really have to have a product that differentiates your business from the competition in order to succeed. Without knowing if there is any competition or other businesses like yours in the area that you plan on starting the coffee shop, it is hard to project whether or not your claims about a dedicated base of customers will actually exist. Thanks for sharing!”
“Hey Michael!
I agree with RJ, from your previous post, you mentioned the 5 steps and the models that you would like to follow for the coffee business. I really like how you went into more depth of how and why people would buy your product. It is still different from the loss information about your competition, but I believe research can easily fix that. Thanks for sharing!”
I agree with RJ, from your previous post, you mentioned the 5 steps and the models that you would like to follow for the coffee business. I really like how you went into more depth of how and why people would buy your product. It is still different from the loss information about your competition, but I believe research can easily fix that. Thanks for sharing!”
1.)
You- I am a graduating senior this
semester at UF. Being a business major, my academic skills are strongest in
math and critical reasoning. My experiences thus far have been in sports,
tourism, and financial services. My biggest aspirations involve working for myself
in some capacity and traveling. If my business were to take off, I would feel
great fulfilment at work, as well as in the lifestyle that my business would
provide for me outside of work.
2.)
What are you offering to customers? - I’ll
be providing my customers with Coffee and assorted breakfast items, which they
cannot get made to order anywhere very close to our location.
3.)
Who are you offering it to? - My customers
will be the guests, residents, and staff at Laketown Warf Resort. The typical
guest is a family of four on vacation. Most residents are either young singles
or retired people. The staff comprises of locals and seasonal workers in the
summer. This is a very broad range of people, allowing me to have a diverse
customer base.
4.)
Why do they care? - Customers will care
about our shop for a variety of reasons. First, caffeine is addictive, so while
people won’t need a cup to get ready for work, their body will still crave that
coffee. Second, there is not really a convenient place nearby to get coffee.
Third, and last, people tend to go out to eat more while on vacation.
5.)
What are your core competencies? - My core competencies center around my
work ethic and positive attitude. I believe that your mindset will ultimately
determine success.
I believe that these five factors fall together
harmoniously. The customers will be on-sight regardless of whether the coffee
is there or not, so I think demand will be easily projectable.
Feedback memo - I always appreciate feedback and
have taken these two pieces into consideration for my revised Idea Napkin. While
I did find this feedback useful, I think that it is worth noting that I have
mentioned in several previous posts that there is not a coffee shop within 10
miles of my desired location. However, just because there are no coffee shops
does not mean I would be the only one selling coffee in the area, so I guess
there is still some competition.
Hi Michael! I really like that you've stuck with your idea and listened to the feedback others gave you. As one of your included comments said, it is hard to run a restaurant type business. I think what will make this opportunity successful is that there are no other places to exclusively get coffee, and that there is a lot of traffic in that area. I think it was also smart of you to include breakfast foods in your menu, so the business does not solely rely on coffee sales. As something to think about- Coffee shops usually have pretty bland food so customers will spend less time at the shop therefore increasing how many customers will pass through. If you want to entice people with breakfast foods, I think it is important to consider space, tabling, and how to make it convenient for people who JUST want coffee. I think a happy medium might be having breakfast foods that one can order off a simple menu for a sit down experience, as well as some "to-go" food options like pre-made sandwiches or pastries.
ReplyDeleteHey Michael! I loved from the feedback that you received, you got to edit your second idea napkin. I really like how you mentioned that you like to keep a positive attitude when it comes to work ethic because I also agree that it helps me to complete my tasks. This could also generate new ideas. But when it comes to your coffee shop, I agree with Hannah when she mentioned that you need to mention something about the amount of space in the store. Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteMichael, I really enjoyed how well you know both yourself and your business idea. The research you've put into crystallizing every detail of your business, its market, and its unique aspects is commendable! The development of your business and the expert way in which you incorporate your peers' feedback is inspiring and I hope to be able to do some of the same!
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